In this awesome scheme of things you'll get a B+ for effort. Where you actually misplaced everybody was first on your facts. As as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be much more correct at this point. Having said that, let me tell you exactly what did work. Your article (parts of it) is extremely engaging and this is probably why I am making the effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, despite the fact that I can certainly see a leaps in logic you come up with, I am definitely not convinced of how you seem to connect the details which inturn help to make the conclusion. For right now I shall subscribe to your issue however hope in the near future you actually connect your dots much better.